Out of Bounds 2003:

Radio Mystery Theatre

Revision Notes

Revised Script

What Needs Fixing, and How Badly Does It Need to Be Fixed?

The Peter sez:

I have a real soft spot for this one, and I think it holds together just fine. The only thing I would note is that we have a real plethora of material here, so we do have the luxury of cutting the weakest jokes.


The Bob sez:

This reads through at 4:55; kinda long but I think the pacing is good. Nothing stands out as really needing to be cut out or edited.

Grab Bag of Material to Add

Footnotes