OobAnacondaRevisionNotes

Out of Bounds 2003:

Anaconda

Revision Notes

Revised Script

What Needs Fixing, and How Badly Does It Need to Be Fixed?

The Peter sez:

Great, great promise on this one (I'm always so self-aggrandizing towards the pieces from my weeks). However, the following lyrics are awkward and must needs be fixed:

• "To encapsulate nativity"

  • What the hell does this even mean?

• "We don't act as if with impunity / But trust in British wit and unity"

  • Metrically awkward.
  • "Wit and unity" -- who says that? Ever?

• "Even inveterate technologists"

  • Everything is fine except for the two t's next to each other. Makes it hella awkward to sing.

Okay, I've fixed a couple of them, but the second one is now

British is a lovely thing to be When it lets you travel with impunity!

... still needs fixage. Any ideas?

Wait never mind -- nailed it! (Whee!) I think this is ready to go. Just add music. Uh, wait... we don't have any music yet. Arg!

The Bob sez:

Times out at 3:40, though that's probably short for gaps for recovery between songs. I swore it'd be longer.

Grab Bag of Material to Add

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